Teacherspeak

This essay isn't typed correctly.

Those letters should be capitalized.

You need a period there.

This paragraph isn't well-structured.

That idea needs support.

The logic in this essay is weak.

The most important lessons aren't in books.

Brain death is not supposed to happen before age 80.

If you used even 12% of your potential,
you'd be far ahead of most human beings.

If teachers don't offer what you need
find it elsewhere.