Practical English Writing: An EFL Composition Course Assignment #11: Independent Writing Projects

Yingko, Taiwan: a Ceramic Community
by Kathy Wong, Jane Yeh, and Tiffany Jau

O   R   I   G   I   N   A   L

Taipei County is in the northern part of Taiwan, which also surrounds Taipei City, including eight cities, six towns and fifteen countries. The population is about 3440211 people, which takes more than 15% of Taiwan's population. Obviously, it's the biggest county in Taiwan. The main stream Taipei County is Ten-Sui River. Industry is more prosperous than commercial in Taipei country, especially the sectors of electricity, computer, machine, and plastics. Most citizens in Taipei Country are Taiwanese, and Hakarian; therefore, many different cultures are mixed together - Taipei country is a diversity county.
Yingko town is located in the southwest part of Taipei County. It connects with Taoyuan county in both west and north sides. This town is named after Yingko because of a huge stone perfectly in the middle of a mountain. The shape of the stone is like an eagle; therefore it was named after Yingko and the name, Yingko, is sounds like an eagle in Chinese. If we mention Yingko in Taiwan, most people always associate this town with china soon because Yingko is famous for finest china.
Yingko's history has begun with china's production since 1805, the year the immigrants of first generation, who moved from China to Taiwan. They discovered that the soil of Yingko is quite suitable to make china, and decided to open china factories here and earn lots of money by producing china with traditional skills. With the time passed by, Yingko developed with the growing of china's production gradually.
In 1921, the china production organization established in Yingko, and the birth of this official organization changed the circumstance of making china here. There could be more and more china factories and people wouldn't stand the only one factory anymore. After the year 1921, Yingko became the main source of china in Taipei state. After the year 1931, the Japan authorities promoted the industrialization in Taiwan and so did Yingko. From that time, Yingko started producing other kinds of china besides some traditional ones such as cooking equipment or furniture and developed special production in industrial field. Many factories tended to make china by profession and modern machines instead of using traditional ways of making. What's more, at the yeas 1945, Yingko became the center of china in Taiwan. Partly because more and more factories used advanced making skills and the mass transportation got better from Yingko to everywhere in Taiwan. Partly because Taiwan joined the international exhibition in American and attracted many people request to produce the china successfully. That's the climax in Yingko's history.
Now there are at least 800 china factories in Yingko, and you can say that "No china, no Yingko". Visitors can find that there is thick dust covering on the appearance of the house and are impressed with the different atmosphere saturated in this small town. People can learn how to make china, how to enjoy the beauty of china , or go picnicking in the old china factories left in Yingko for a whole day and you'll love this town of china gradually for no reasons.
Q   U   E   S   T   I   O   N   S   

  1. What aspects of this essay seem superfluous?
  2. What English mistakes do you notice?
  3. Prior to 1805 what was Yingko?
  4. Are there any spots in Yingko worth visiting?
  5. What references did you use to write this?
  6. What books or web sites can offer more information about Yingko?

R   E   V   I   S   I   O   N

Yingko town is located in the southwest part of Taipei County, about 30 km southwest of Taipei City. The word "Yinko" means eagle because a huge rock on a hill in that town resembles an eagle. Yingko is renown for its ceramics.
China production began here in 1805, when immigrants from mainland China discovered that the soil around Yingko was quite suitable for ceramics, and decided to open china factories. Over time, Yingko gained a reputation as an outstanding china production center.
In 1921, a china production organization was established in Yingko as more and more china factories emerged. After 1921, Yingko became the main source of china for northern Taiwan. In 1931, Japanese authorities promoted the further industrialization of Yingko and the town started producing other kinds of ceramic goods such as cooking equipment and industrial machines. Gradually, the sales volume of these types of ceramic goods surpassed traditional china. In 1945, Yingko became Taiwan's leading ceramic production center. Partly because more and more factories used advanced making skills and the mass transportation got better from Yingko to elsewhere in Taiwan. Partly because Taiwan joined an international exhibition in America which attracted much interest in the ceramics goods of that town.
Today there are at least 800 china factories in Yingko, and the ceramic industry is the mainstay of the economy. Visitors can find that there is thick dust covering many houses around Yingko. Yingko is a nice place to learn how to make china, or to enjoy the beauty of china, or go picnicking around the old china factories which remain in this town.


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